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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first diagram illustrates the process of wave energy generating machine and the second diagram shows location of energy generators and their output. We can see that electricity using two turbines and one electricity generator, and that energy-generating process consist of two chambers stages for waves airflow and atmospheric airflow. At the first stage in the production of wave energy water's airflow only get intact in the second chamber. Next, chamber wave's airflow speed rotates the turbine and at that time atmospheric airflow also take's part and both airflow together rotate the turbine. The Shaft of turbines is consolidated with a rotor of energy generator. Shaft connection with rotor generate rotating motion and help electricity generator to get energy output. The energy generator machine has two location options. The beginning location is for tiny waves which give less output though installation cost is low. The second spot is for large waves that can archive high output and installation cost is low as compared to the nearest location from the beach.
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wave
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energy
generating machine and the second diagram

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shows


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location
of
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energy
generators and their
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output
. We
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can


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see


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that
electricity using two turbines and one electricity generator, and that energy-generating process consist of two chambers stages for
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waves
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airflow
and atmospheric
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airflow
. At
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the


first


stage in the production of
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wave
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energy
water's airflow

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only


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intact
in the second chamber.

Next
, chamber wave's
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airflow
speed rotates the turbine and at that time atmospheric airflow

also


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take
's part and both
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airflow
together rotate the turbine. The Shaft of
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turbines


is consolidated


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with
a rotor of
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energy
generator. Shaft connection with rotor generate rotating motion
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and


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help


electricity generator to

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get


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energy
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output
. The
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energy
generator machine has two location options. The beginning location is for tiny
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waves
which give less
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output
though installation cost is low. The second spot is for large
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waves
that can archive high
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output
and installation cost is low as compared to the nearest location from the beach.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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  American English
19 paragraphs
170 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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