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The table shows the percentage of rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September, 1995 to 2010 and also the star rating of each hotel.

The table shows the percentage of rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September, 1995 to 2010 and also the star rating of each hotel. 6naK
The table provides a comparison of occupied rooms in six different hotels from May to September during 1995 and 2010 as well as demonstrates the star rating for each hotel. Overall, the proportion of occupied rooms in those hotels decreased from the beginning year to the ending year. It was only Winterfell hotel, which held the same percentage of occupied rooms at the end of the period as well as had the highest stars rating, while the Eyrie had the lowest stars rating, along with second last occupied rooms percentage. In 1995, both hotels, Winterfell (five-star hotel) and Harrenhal (three-star hotel) had the same and the highest percentage of occupied rooms about 100%. However, although both hotels experienced a decline of about 5% and 20%, respectively in 2000, the percentage of those rooms increased in Winterfell Hotel, held the first position after 15 years, whereas the percentage remained same for Harrenhal Hotel. In Dragonstone Hotel, 90% of rooms were occupied in the year of 1995, but it experienced a greater reduction of proportion at about 24% and therefore, reached 66% and became the least popular hotel in 2010. This is closely followed by the Eyrie Hotel. On the other hand, both Casterly Rock Hotel, which had a rating of 4 stars, contained the lowest occupied rooms percentage, such as only 57%, as well as 3 stars Hotel of Castle containing 90% occupied rooms, showed a greater increase at the ending year, 2010.
The table provides a comparison of
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in six
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from May to September during 1995 and 2010
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for each hotel.

Overall
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decreased from the beginning
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to the ending
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. It was
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Winterfell
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, which held the same
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, while the
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In 1995, both
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Winterfell
(five-star
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and
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Harrenhal
(three-star
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had the same and the highest
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about 100%.
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experienced a decline of about 5% and 20%,
respectively
in 2000, the
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increased in
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Winterfell
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, held the
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Harrenhal
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Dragonstone
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, 90% of
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in 2010. This is
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Hotel.

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Rock
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,
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IELTS academic The table shows the percentage of rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September, 1995 to 2010 and also the star rating of each hotel.

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