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The graph below shows the number of graduates from the high college of Technology for men and women in the 1999. Summarise the information, by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant..

The graph below shows the number of graduates from the high college of Technology for men and women in the 1999. 8odB
The bar graph chart shows the number of people who got the graduate from Technology college in 1999 men and women. Womens dominated mens by getting high number of graduate from all the branches in different places. However, the number of graduate people got raise up from Raas AI Kaimah men 100 and women 150 to approximetly to 420 men and 550 women in Dubai. The progresion went so high. However, Shariah got good development on women graduate compare to AI Aim. Graduating approximetly 150 womens in Sarjah compare to 120 graguate womens in AI Aim, and mens got good graduate in both palces rasing up approximetly 180 in Sarjah to 210 in AI Aim. Abu Dhabi also achieved good improvement number of graduate both women and men. To sum up all the HCT college branches did well getting good gratuates men 100 to more than 400 and women 150 numers to more than 500 even thou it it little down in AI Aim branch.
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