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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. mpD1
The pie chart describes the various causes of how agriculture land become less productivity and secondly the table illustrates the effect of land degradation in North America, Europe and Oceania. Overall, according to the given figure over gazing is the major cause of land degradation and Europe is the main area is effected by land gradation. Through the pie chart statics, 35 per cent all over the world over gazing is the major cause of land degradation and the second major reason around the world is deforestation (30 per cent) which make the agriculture land less productivity. Following that 28 per cent are because of over-cultivation and 7 per cent are due to other reasons. According to the table figure, Europe region (23 per cent) is mainly affected by land degradation out of which is 9. 8 per cent deforestation, 7. 7 per cent over-cultivation and only 5. 5 per cent over gazing. Next to that is Oceania 13 per cent in which 11. 3 per cent this affect due to the reason of over gazing and surprisingly null per cent is for over-cultivation but when compared with North America (5 per cent) which is the least effective are of land degradation the 3. 3 per cent of land degradation is due over cultivation.
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become less productivity and
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the table illustrates the effect of
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land
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degradation
in North America, Europe and Oceania.

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, according to the
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given
figure
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gazing is the major cause of
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land
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degradation
and Europe is the main area
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land
gradation.

Through the pie chart statics, 35 per cent all
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the world
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gazing is the major cause of
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land
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degradation
and the second major reason around the world is deforestation (30 per cent) which
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make
the agriculture
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land
less productivity. Following that 28 per cent are
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of over-cultivation and 7 per cent are due to other reasons.

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degradation
out of which is 9. 8 per cent deforestation, 7. 7 per cent over-cultivation and
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only
5. 5 per cent
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over
gazing.
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Oceania 13 per cent in which 11. 3 per cent this affect due to the reason of
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gazing and
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null per cent is for over-cultivation
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when compared with North America (5 per cent) which is the least effective are of
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the 3. 3 per cent of
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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