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: the line graph and pie chart below give us information about the number and popularity of different types of hit songs released from 1950 to 1999. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

: the line graph and pie chart below give us information about the number and popularity of different types of hit songs released from 1950 to 1999. JkwE
The information given focuses on hit songs released from 1950 to 1999 and consist of a line graph and a pie chart. The former shows the number of hit songs per decade, while the latter indicates their popularity by genre. First, the music industry released more than 50 rock hit songs in 1950-1959 and they soared to 400 songs in 1970-1979. Later, however, this number declined and by 1990-1999 there were only 250 hit songs. In 1950-1959 the jazz category achieved the release of the most hit songs, which was 200, but afterwards they decreased below 50 songs in 1980-1989. This number rose slightly to more than 150 in 1990-1999. Last but not least, hip hop songs presented no hit songs in the beginning, although they increased dramatically after 1970-1979. In 1990-1999 there are around 300 hip hop hit songs released. As for the overall popularity, rock songs are clearly the most popular with 55%, jazz follows with 27%, and finally hip hop with only 18%. All in all, rock hit songs were the most common for many years, while hip hop was still rising, and jazz was declining. In 1990-1999 this is not the case anymore, since hip hop hit songs exceeded them, whereas jazz is steadily coming back.
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songs released from 1950 to 1999 and consist of a line graph and a pie chart. The former
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the number of
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songs per decade, while the latter indicates their popularity by genre.

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songs. In 1950-1959 the jazz category achieved the release of the most
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afterwards they decreased below 50 songs in 1980-1989. This number rose
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hop songs presented no
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songs in the beginning, although they increased
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songs released. As for the
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All in all, rock
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songs exceeded them, whereas jazz is
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IELTS academic : the line graph and pie chart below give us information about the number and popularity of different types of hit songs released from 1950 to 1999.

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