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The table shows the number of overseas visits to the UK by country of residence and mode of travel in two years.

The table shows the number of overseas visits to the UK by country of residence and mode of travel in two years. Wn6kq
The table demonstrates the number of foreign visits to the UK by several countries and their way of transportation in two years. Overall, it is shown on the table that people mostly used to travel by air and tunnel transportations except Belgium and France. Totally, the proportion of usage air mode is 6 times higher rather than tunnel in 2011 and 2013. Moreover, Bulgaria had the lowest data in using both modes of travel, however air mode was quite popular than tunnel in average for 7 times. The proportion of usage air mode of travel in countries such as Bulgaria, Germany, Italy, Portugal and Sweden were much higher than results of usage of tunnels in 2011 and 2013. Data of air and tunnel transportation has changed in the period from 2011 to 2013. Results of the table shows that proportion of usage air mode in all countries except Portugal had slightly increase. Data in Portugal gradually decreased from 260 to 251. Additionally, the results of the tunnel were quite similar. In countries like Belgium, France and Portugal had a steady growth, while Bulgaria and Germany’s data in 2011 was twice as much is in 2013. Data in Italy probably remained the same, whereas, the results in Sweden decreased and in 2011 usage of tunnels was 6 times higher than in 2013. To conclude, both modes have been changed during two years and air mode became more popular for overseas visits to the UK in 2011-2013.
The table demonstrates the number of foreign visits to the UK by several
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countries
and their way of transportation in two years.

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, it
is shown
on the table that
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people
mostly
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used
to travel by
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air
and
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tunnel
transportations except Belgium and France.

Totally
, the proportion of
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usage
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air
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mode
is 6 times higher
rather
than
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tunnel
in 2011 and 2013.
Moreover
, Bulgaria had the lowest
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data
in using both
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modes
of travel,
however
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air
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mode
was quite
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popular
than
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tunnel
in average for 7 times. The proportion of
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usage
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air
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mode
of travel in
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countries
such as Bulgaria, Germany, Italy, Portugal and Sweden were much higher than
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results
of
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usage
of
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tunnels
in 2011 and
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2013. Data
of
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air
and
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tunnel
transportation has
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changed
in the period from 2011 to 2013.
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Results
of the table
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shows
that proportion of
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usage
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air
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mode
in all
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countries
except Portugal had
slightly
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increase
.
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Data
in Portugal
gradually
decreased from 260 to 251.

Additionally
, the
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results
of the
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tunnel
were quite similar. In
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countries
like Belgium, France and Portugal had a steady growth, while Bulgaria and Germany’s
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data
in 2011 was twice as much is in 2013.
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Data
in Italy
probably
remained the same, whereas, the
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results
in Sweden decreased and in 2011
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usage
of
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tunnels
was 6 times higher than in 2013.

To conclude
, both
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modes
have been
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changed
during two years and
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air
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mode
became more popular for overseas visits to the UK in 2011-2013.
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IELTS academic The table shows the number of overseas visits to the UK by country of residence and mode of travel in two years.

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