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The bar chart compares the rates of people’s coffee and tea which are boughts and drunk by habits in five Australian cities .

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The bar chart compares the rates of people’s coffee and tea which are boughts and drunk by habits in five Australian cities. Overall, The results of survey went to cafe in last four weeks which got over than half in the cities except Adelaide. On the contrary, Fresh coffee was bought with the least position in the chart. In last four weeks, stocking up on fresh coffee holds the bottom spot in the ranking in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart which was rought at 44%, 43%, 34%, 34. 5% and 37% respectively. In addition, Hobart was the only city where bought instant coffee highest at 54%, followed by Brisbane at 53%, instant coffee in Adelaide was higher than usage in a cafe, Melbourne at 48% and lastly Sydney (just over 45%). Going to café to enjoy good coffee and tea, it was most characteristic of Hobart and Melbourne at 64% and 63%, respectively. The similar popularity is Sydney where the highest rate in this city was at 61%. Brisbane was still high with percentage of just over 55% and the finally Adelaide at under 50%
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in last four weeks which
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than half in the cities except Adelaide.
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was
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with the least position in the chart.

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holds the bottom spot in the ranking in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart which was
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rought
at 44%, 43%, 34%, 34. 5% and 37%
respectively
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city where
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highest at 54%, followed by Brisbane at 53%, instant
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coffee
in Adelaide was higher than usage in a
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, Melbourne at 48% and
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over 45%).

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good
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and tea, it was most characteristic of Hobart and Melbourne at 64% and 63%,
respectively
. The similar popularity is Sydney where the highest rate in this city was at 61%. Brisbane was
still
high with percentage of
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over 55% and the
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Adelaide at under 50%

IELTS academic The bar chart compares the rates of people’s coffee and tea which are boughts and drunk by habits in five Australian cities.

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