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The table shows the number of fatal, serious and slight injuries resulting from gun and knife crime in Great Britain from 1998 to 2007 and the percentage increase for each degree of injury over the period.

The table shows the number of fatal, serious and slight injuries resulting from gun and knife crime in Great Britain from 1998 to 2007 and the percentage increase for each degree of injury over the period. Bk79

The table below gives information about the number of various levels of injuries resulting from attack by criminals with gun or knife in Great Britain in decade from 1998. Overall it is clear that, the quantity of criminals attack increased every year and most of them had slight injuries in whole period. In the beginning of the period total number of crimes was slightly less than a thousand and only quarter of them was injured seriously. From 1999 until 2002 there were no more than two thousand victims and the number of people injured slightly was around thousand and who injuried fatally was around eighty. Between 2002 and 2004 there were slightly more than two thousand crimes and the number of fatal crimes was decreased third. At the end of the period the total quantity of criminals attack was increased dramatically and accounted for slightly less than four thousand but the number of people injuried fatal was around 500.

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