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diagram shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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Provided diagram explains the process of generating electricity in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, the water is made to flow from the river to the power station, from where it is supplied to the national grid through power lines. To start with, the water from the river is stored into the high-level reservoir. during the day, the dam allows the flow of water towards the power station which consists of a generator as well as reversible turbines. The generator operates during the day and allows the generated electricity to flow through the power lines into the national grid. On the other hand, during the night time, water obtained through the low-level reservoir passes through the reversible turbines present in the power station, which in turn pump the water into the high-level reservoir through the tube which connects the dam and the power station. The intake through the high-level reservoir is closed during this time.
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the process of generating electricity in a hydroelectric
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power
station.

Overall
, the
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water
is made
to flow from the river to the
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power
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station
, from where it
is supplied
to the national grid
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through
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power
lines.

To
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start
with, the
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water
from the river
is stored
into the high-level
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reservoir
.
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during
the day, the dam
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allows
the flow of
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water
towards the
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power
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station
which consists of a generator
as well
as reversible turbines. The generator operates during the day and
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allows
the generated electricity to flow
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through
the
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power
lines into the national grid.

On the other hand
, during the
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night time
,
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water
obtained
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through
the low-level
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reservoir
passes
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through
the reversible turbines present in the
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power
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station
, which in turn pump the
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water
into the high-level
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reservoir
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through
the tube which connects the dam and the
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power
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station
. The intake
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through
the high-level
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reservoir
is closed
during this time.
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IELTS academic diagram shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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4 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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