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The map below show the chanages that have taken place in Sometown and Stonebay since 2000.

The map below show the chanages that have taken place in Sometown and Stonebay since 2000. 31WJ
The given diagrams elicits the evaluation of two places, that is, Stonebay village and Sometown, in the time span of 40 years, in the course of 20 year gaps. Overall, it is evident that the towns have upgraded its transformational facilities over the years. Even, the place is crowded with extra modern amenities. In 2000, it is noticeable that the area is quiet basic, where Sometown is located on Eastern side of the map, through which a railway line is running, across the town, from north-east to south-west. Moreover, Stonebay village is situated nearly to the center of the map. A road is built from the middle of the village starting from north and ending in west. By 2020, the place of the village and town was same but they had been enlarged. Stonebay had constructed a housing estate to its north, a super store to its south and a leisure complex between them. A new road was also established, connected to the older one, to east, running in between leisure complex and super store and clashing through railroad. In 2040, the stonebay will be transformed into suburbs, joining it along Sometown. A Hotel will be put up on the eastern side of housing estate, a business park beside Leisure complex and a station sticking to the new road. A service road will be assembled, adjoining the old and new road, going along with leisure complex and business park.
The
given
diagrams elicits the evaluation of two places,
that is
,
Stonebay
village
and
Sometown
, in the time span of 40 years, in the course of 20 year gaps.

Overall
, it is evident that the towns have upgraded its transformational facilities over the years. Even, the place
is crowded
with extra modern amenities.

In 2000, it is noticeable that the area is
quiet
basic, where
Sometown
is located
on Eastern side of the map, through which a railway line is running, across the town, from north-east to south-west.
Moreover
,
Stonebay
village
is situated
nearly
to the center of the map. A
road
is built
from the middle of the
village
starting from north and ending in west. By 2020, the place of the
village
and town was same
but
they had
been enlarged
.
Stonebay
had constructed a housing estate to its north, a super store to its south and a
leisure
complex
between them. A new
road
was
also
established, connected to the older one, to east, running in between
leisure
complex
and super store and clashing through railroad.

In 2040, the
stonebay
will
be transformed
into suburbs, joining it along
Sometown
. A Hotel will
be put
up on the eastern side of housing estate, a business park beside
Leisure
complex
and a station sticking to the new
road
. A service
road
will
be assembled
, adjoining the
old
and new
road
, going along with
leisure
complex
and business park.
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