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The graph bellow give information about water use worldwide from 1900 to 2000

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The line graph compares three sectors in terms of water use between 1900 and 2000. Overall, it is important to note that water use by agriculture was a dramatic increase whereas water use by industrial and domestic use was raised significantly. As graph shows, agriculture's water use started at approximately 500 km in 1900 followed by small increase to around in 1940. Then, it improved slightly well over 1000 km in 1960. Aftet increasing slowly between 1960 and 1970, water use by agriculture soared to 3000 km in 2000. By contrast, the water use by industrial use experienced an increase in 100-year period. In 1900, just over 10 km were used. From 1900 to 1960 there was a gradual increase. Then, there was a significant increase to just over 1000km

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