Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The graph bellow give information about water use worldwide from 1900 to 2000

The graph bellow give information about water use worldwide from 1900 to 2000 xw8y
The line graph compares three sectors in terms of water use between 1900 and 2000. Overall, it is important to note that water use by agriculture was a dramatic increase whereas water use by industrial and domestic use was raised significantly. As graph shows, agriculture's water use started at approximately 500 km in 1900 followed by small increase to around in 1940. Then, it improved slightly well over 1000 km in 1960. Aftet increasing slowly between 1960 and 1970, water use by agriculture soared to 3000 km in 2000. By contrast, the water use by industrial use experienced an increase in 100-year period. In 1900, just over 10 km were used. From 1900 to 1960 there was a gradual increase. Then, there was a significant increase to just over 1000km
The line graph compares three sectors in terms of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
between 1900 and 2000.
Overall
, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to note that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
by agriculture was a dramatic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
whereas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
by industrial and domestic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
was raised
significantly
. As graph
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
, agriculture's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
at approximately 500 km in 1900 followed by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
to around in 1940. Then, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
slightly
well over 1000 km in 1960.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Aftet
increasing
slowly
between 1960 and 1970,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
by agriculture soared to 3000 km in 2000. By contrast, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
by industrial
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
experienced an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
in 100-year period. In 1900,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
over 10 km were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
. From 1900 to 1960 there was a gradual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
. Then, there was a significant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
over
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "1000 km"
1000km
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The graph bellow give information about water use worldwide from 1900 to 2000

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The graph bellow give information about water use worldwide from 1900 to 2000