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The given charts shown that year expenditures for five different categories of a school in the UK during 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, it is clear that the largest proportion of spending was on teacher’s salaries in all three years, whereas insurance was the lowest expenditure in each year. In 1981, teachers salaries constituted the highest percentage of the school cost, which was 40%. This figure increased to 50% in 1991, but went down again by 45% in 2001. However, another expenses for other worker’s salaries were gradually decline over 20 year period, from 28% in 1981 to only 15% in the year 2001. Spending on insurance was only 2% of the total in 1981, while it developed slowly by 8% in 2001. Furthermore, the proportions for resources and furniture/ equipment had fluctuated during three years. The amount of resources was the maximum in 1991, at 20%, while the percentage of expenditure on furniture and equipment reached the highest in 2001, at 23% respectively.

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 categories of a school in the UK during 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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 that the largest proportion of spending was on teacher’s salaries in all three years, whereas insurance was the lowest expenditure in each year.

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 went down again by 45% in 2001. However
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, the proportions for resources and furniture/ equipment had fluctuated during three years. The amount of resources was the maximum in 1991, at 20%, while the percentage of expenditure on furniture and equipment reached the highest in 2001, at 23% respectively
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