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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. 2Wxx
The given line graph provides information about 3 different types of air pollutants (households, industry and transport) in Great Britain between 1990 and 2005 and it is measured by million tonna. Overal, in first two lines shown only dropped and final 2 category illustrated fluctuation during the years in this graph. It can be plainly viewed that the first line was total air pollutions. In 1990 it accounted for 7 billion tonna and from 1990 to 1999 this category given considerably decline (by 3 million tonna) as well as final year (in 2005) it made up roughly 3. 2 000 000 tonna while the second line is industry in 1990 represented about 5. 5 billion tonna however it went down year by year and in 2005 it made uo only 2 billions tonna. It is seem that transport and households are least billion than others. Both of them sketched out fluctuation. In 1990 transport and households represented about 0. 9 000 000 tonna and by 2005 transport made up only 1 million tonna while households accounted for a tiny portion (roughly 0. 1 billion tonna).
The
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given
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line
graph provides information about 3
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different
types of air pollutants
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(households
, industry and
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transport)
in Great Britain between 1990 and 2005 and it
is measured
by million
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tonna
.

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, in
first
two
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lines
shown
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only
dropped and final 2
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category
illustrated fluctuation during the years in this graph.

It can be
plainly
viewed that the
first
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line
was total air pollutions. In
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1990 it
accounted for 7
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billion
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tonna
and from 1990 to 1999 this category
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given
considerably
decline (by 3 million
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tonna
)
as well
as final
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year
(in 2005) it made up roughly 3. 2 000 000
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tonna
while the second
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line
is industry in 1990 represented about 5. 5
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billion
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tonna
however
it went down
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year
by
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year
and in 2005 it made
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uo
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only
2
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billions
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tonna
.

It is
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seem
that
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transport
and
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households
are least
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billion
than others. Both of them sketched out fluctuation. In 1990
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transport
and
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households
represented about 0. 9 000 000
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tonna
and by 2005
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transport
made up
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only
1 million
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tonna
while
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households
accounted for a tiny portion (roughly 0. 1
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billion
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tonna
).
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IELTS academic The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

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