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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured PYR2

The diagram depicts the manufacturation of instant noodles. Overall, there are 8 main steps involved beginning with transporting flour to a storage and ending with noodles are ready to be distributed. At first, the process takes place mainly in the instant noodles factory. The noodles production starts by transporting flour on a truck directly to storage silos. After that, the flour is put into a machine, mixed up with a small amount of water and oil, following by generating into thin sheets of noodles and going through rollers so as to be cut into strips by a cutting machine. Moving on, those strips of noodle will be transmitted to discs in order to create specific shapes as well as prepare for the frying step. Continuingly, cooked noodles have to be let dry before being put into cups with dried vegetables and spices packs. Lastly, filled cups need to go through labelling and packaging stage in priority to being sold on the market or stores and fully capable of being consumed.

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starts
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small
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cut
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noodle
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 to discs in order to create specific shapes as well
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noodles
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have to
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let
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before
being put
 into cups with dried vegetables and spices packs. Lastly
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 on the market or stores and fully
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. 