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The table shows the number of fatal, serious and slight injuries from gun and knief crime in great Britain from 2008 to 2017and the percentage increase for each degree of injury over the period

The table shows the number of fatal, serious and slight injuries from gun and knief crime in great Britain from 2008 to 2017and the percentage increase for each degree of injury over the period 23Nj
The table above illustrates several deadly, serious, and minimal injuries from knife and gun violations between 2008 to 2017 in Great Britain. Over the period of years, there has been an incline in each degree of crime. Based on the findings, it can be seen that the majority of the injuries were slight. However, from 2014 to 2015 about 3424 people were wounded it was the highest number recorded throughout the years. Surprisingly, there was no one hurt seriously or infinitesimally in 2014 to 2015. Despite the rise in crime rates the fatality rates are way less, it is only 18%. As demonstrated, during 2008 to 2009 the least number of felonies took place; 864 injuries. During the years, 2008 to 2009 and 2015 to 2016, the fatality rate was the same. Unfortunately, just a year later the number increased to 58. Moreover, the total number of all the degrees of injuries sum up to 342.
The table above illustrates several deadly, serious, and minimal injuries from knife and gun violations
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in Great Britain. Over the period of years, there has been an incline in each degree of crime.

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that the majority of the injuries were slight.
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recorded throughout the years.
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in 2014 to 2015. Despite the rise in crime rates the fatality rates are way less, it is
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18%. As demonstrated, during 2008 to 2009 the least
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of felonies took place; 864 injuries.

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increased to 58.
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of all the degrees of injuries sum up to 342.
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IELTS academic The table shows the number of fatal, serious and slight injuries from gun and knief crime in great Britain from 2008 to 2017and the percentage increase for each degree of injury over the period

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