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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. mooA
The given bar graph and table depict the trend of the population and the older population respectively in Japan over a period of 105 years from 1950 to 2055. Overall, the illustration coveys the information that there was a gradual growth in the population in the past following a rapid decline in the future, conversely, people aged 65 and older grew are predicted to grow. The Japanese population grew steadily over the years from 84. 1 million in 1950 to 127. 8 in 2005. However, over the course of the decade from 2005 to 2015, the population started to fall slowly reaching 125. 4 million in the latter year. The estimation of the future in 2055 shows that this trend will continue where the population will reach around 89. 9 million. Although there is a U-shaped curve illustrated by the total population graph, the table represents the continued growth of the older generation. There seems to be a rapid increase in the older population where they started to represent only 4. 9% in 1950 whereas they are going to have two-fifth of the total population as estimated for 2055.
The
given
bar graph and table depict the trend of the
population
and the
older
population
respectively
in Japan over a period of 105 years from 1950 to 2055.

Overall
, the illustration coveys the information that there was a gradual growth in the
population
in the past following a rapid decline in the future,
conversely
,
people
aged 65 and
older
grew
are predicted
to grow.

The Japanese
population
grew
steadily
over the years from 84. 1 million in 1950 to 127. 8 in 2005.
However
, over the course of the decade from 2005 to 2015, the
population
started
to fall
slowly
reaching 125. 4 million in the latter year. The estimation of the future in 2055
shows
that this trend will continue where the
population
will reach around 89. 9 million.

Although there is a U-shaped curve illustrated by the total
population
graph, the table represents the continued growth of the
older
generation. There seems to be a rapid increase in the
older
population
where they
started
to represent
only
4. 9% in 1950 whereas they are going to have two-fifth of the total
population
as estimated for 2055.
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
189 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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