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The line graph gives information about the subway station users in London, during different hours of the day. Overall, the mouvement of passengers using London' underground experience flactuation during the day precisely from 6. 00am to 22. 00 pm. The underground station is most crowded at the morning and later in the afternoon, while less passangers use the station in the middle of the day. Early in the morning at 6. 00 am only 100 passengers take the underground, this figure start to increase gradually to reach a peak of 400 users by 8. 00 am, then the number of poeple begin to fall significantly to less than 200 passengers at 10. 00 am. In addition between 10. 00am and 16. 00pm, after a steady increase to 300 the amount of users drops to 100 people, which is the lowest level of visitors of the day. Afterward the figure rise sharply to slightly less than 400 passengers by 18. 00 pm. With the begening of the evening less people take the subway lines and the figure drops substantialy to approximately 150 at 22. 00 pm.

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different
 hours of the day.

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mouvement
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passengers
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less
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use
 the station in the middle of the day.

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only
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passengers
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start
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, which is the lowest level of visitors of the day. Afterward the figure rise sharply
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less
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passengers
 by 18. 00 pm. With the Possible spelling mistake found.beginningeveningbeggingbeepingbegettingbeefing
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less
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people
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 to approximately 150 at 22. 00 pm. 