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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below illustrates the production and consumption of electricity by the top ten countries in the world for the year 2014. Usage and producing of current depends on the population of the country. China is highly populated followed by India, so is their demand and supply for electricity also. Surprisingly the United states falls in the second place after China in the records of electricity despite being less populated than India. In the year 2014, the Chinese used 5, 322 billion kWh of electricity while their production was 5, 398 billion kWh. Following them, the USA utilized 3, 866 b kWh of their 4, 099 b kWh of current produced. Russia, Japan and India have very slight difference between each other in terms of consumption and production of electricity. In order, they used 1038, 856. 7, 698. 8 billion kWh of electricity whereas their production numbers were 1057, 936. 2, 871 billion kWh.
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produced. Russia, Japan and India have
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slight difference between each other in terms of consumption and
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