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The table shows the literary and employment ratio in different countries in 1990 and 2010

The table shows the literary and employment ratio in different countries in 1990 and 2010 wBDlY
The table describes the literary as well as employment rate in percentage of various nations in a particular years 1990 and 2010. Overall, it is evident that USA and India accounted the highest rates in both the terms, literacy and employment whereas other countries showed a significant change in their ratios in both the years. To commence with, in terms of literacy in 1990, the rate was 67% which rose to 88% after 20 years, while employment rate was 52% which increased by 41% and reached 93% after two decades. Moreover, India had similar trend which had 56% literacy rate and 52% employment rate in 1990, but after that in 2010 it noticed a growth o 30% and was 86% by the year 2010. However, India and Usa had the exact same percentage for literacy and employment, which were 52% and 93% respectively in both years. In regards with other countries such as China, Uk and Australia were having almost similar ratios. China had 42% literacy rate which inclined to 67% after two decades on the contrary, employment rate fell down from 67% to 61%. Furthermore, Uk accounted a growth of 32% in literacy and whereas it's employment rate declined from 78% to 60% in 1990 and 2010. Lastly, Australia noted a drastic increase in both category, which were 49% in 1990 and reached 95% in 2010, also employment rate rose from 70% to 72% in the given time lapse.
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employment
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in percentage of various nations in a particular
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1990 and 2010.
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, it is evident that USA and India accounted the highest
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rates
in both the terms,
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literacy
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employment
whereas other countries
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showed
a significant
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change
in their ratios in both the years. To commence with, in terms of
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literacy
in 1990, the
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rate
was 67% which rose to 88% after 20 years, while
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employment
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rate
was 52% which increased by 41% and reached 93% after two decades.
Moreover
, India had similar trend which had 56%
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literacy
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rate
and 52%
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employment
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rate
in 1990,
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after that in 2010 it noticed a growth o 30% and was 86% by the
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2010.
However
, India and
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Usa
had the exact same percentage for
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literacy
and
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employment
, which were 52% and 93%
respectively
in both years. In regards with other countries such as China,
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Uk
and Australia were having almost similar ratios. China had 42%
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literacy
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rate
which inclined to 67% after two decades
on the contrary
,
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employment
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rate
fell down from 67% to 61%.
Furthermore
,
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Uk
accounted a growth of 32% in
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literacy
and whereas it's
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employment
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rate
declined from 78% to 60% in 1990 and 2010.
Lastly
, Australia noted a drastic increase in both category, which were 49% in 1990 and reached 95% in 2010,
also
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employment
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rate
rose from 70% to 72% in the
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time lapse
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