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The given line graph illustrate the information about how underground station passenger numbers change in London according to the hours.

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The given line graph illustrate the information about how underground station passenger numbers change in London according to the hours. Overall, whn we looked at the line chart in general, it can be seen that number of passengers' line has a upward trend. Moreover, use of underground station is highest at 8 o'clock. Initially, getting back to the in detail, we can see that number of passengers pick dramatically at 8 a. m. , which are 400 people. Following this, this number drops to nearly 170 people. After that, the use of the metro increases steadily by time by in afternoon times. Next, there is a fall to the bottom which is same number as the initial which are 100 people at 4 p. m. . Then, number of passengers reach at approximately 380 people. Finally, there are significant decrease which are about 125 people at 8 p. m. and reach under 150 people at 10 p. m. .

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