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The paragraph shows the average global sea level increase, measured in millimetres, for the years 1997 to 2005, in one- yearly intervals.

The paragraph shows the average global sea level increase, measured in millimetres, for the years 1997 to 2005, in one- yearly intervals. d3pPP
The paragraph shows the average global sea level increase, measured in millimetres, for the years 1997 to 2005, in one- yearly intervals. Overall, the graph shows the level increased over time. In 1997, the level was approximate 5 millimetres. This remained relative stable after two years, in 1998 and 1999. Then, it rose dramatically to 10 millimetres in 2000. It continued increasing about 2 millimetres in 2001. In 2002, this increased significantly to about 7 millimetres. This remained after one year with approximately 20 millimetres in 2003. It rose slightly to 4 millimetres in 2004. This increased to a peak of about 30 millimetres in 2005.
The paragraph
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shows
the average global sea level increase, measured in

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millimetres
, for the years 1997 to 2005, in one- yearly intervals.
Overall
, the

graph
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the level increased over time. In 1997, the level was approximate 5

Possible spelling mistake. 'millimetres' is British English.
millimetres
. This remained relative stable after two years, in 1998 and 1999.

Then, it rose
dramatically
to 10
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millimetres
in 2000. It continued increasing

about 2
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millimetres
in 2001. In 2002, this increased
significantly
to about 7

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millimetres
. This remained after one year with approximately 20
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millimetres
in

2003. It rose
slightly
to 4
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millimetres
in 2004. This increased to a peak of about

30
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millimetres
in 2005.
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IELTS academic The paragraph shows the average global sea level increase, measured in millimetres, for the years 1997 to 2005, in one- yearly intervals.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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