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The table shows the data different types of fast food which were consumed in Melbourne in 2005, present and 2025

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The information about five major kinds of junk food eaten in 2005 and current time along with prediction for 2025 is delineated by the table. Overall, it can be evidently seen that consumption of hamburger is at the peak in three given years. wheares, noodles is least in throughout the time frame. Looking at the details, it is clear that initiating 40units of hamburger were utilised in 2005; however, it had decreased by 2units in present time. whilst, it is estimated to reach 51 units in 2025. Although the utilisation of fried chicken was 35 units, it elevated to 37 units and the usage of fried chicken would be 45 units in future time. Probing further, 5units salad were intaken by people from Melbourne in first year. While, this units were thrice as compared to past period. Whereas, it is predicted that by 2025, the ingestion of salad will be 41 units. Moving towards the rest information, same units of fried rice and noodles were eaten by individuals which comprised for 6 units in 2005 Meanwhile, a difference of 1units were seen between the ingestion of fried rice and noodles in current time. After that, equal units of last both types of junk food would be ingested in 2025
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wheares
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of hamburger were
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utilised
in 2005;
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2units
in present
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.
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whilst
, it
is estimated
to reach 51
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units
in 2025. Although the
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utilisation
of
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fried
chicken was 35
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units
, it elevated to 37
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units
and the usage of
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fried
chicken would be 45
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units
in future
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time
. Probing
further
,
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5units
salad were
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were thrice as compared to past period. Whereas, it
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units
. Moving towards the rest information, same
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units
of
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fried
rice and noodles
were eaten
by individuals which comprised for 6
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units
in 2005 Meanwhile, a difference of
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1units
were
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fried
rice and noodles in
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of last both types of junk food would
be ingested
in 2025
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IELTS academic The table shows the data different types of fast food which were consumed in Melbourne in 2005, present and 2025

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