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The bar chart below illustrated five different country of Brazil economy on 2009 and 2019 with a forcast for 2021

The bar chart below illustrated five different country of Brazil economy on 2009 and 2019 with a forcast for 2021 k6LYW
The assigned pillar chart compares the share of five distinct factories Finance, Food processing, Tourism, Manufacturing, and oil, coal and gas which contributed to Brazil economy in year 2009 and 2019 with perdication of future 2029. To commence with, in year 2009 maximum made up of Finance at 30% whereas, fraction of food processing dwindled by 20, %. The proportion of Tourism, oil coal and gas almost equal below 30%. After a decade Finance share over 35% which was peak in time, while Food processing and Tourism participated for economy around 20 % and oil, coal and gas had second highest ratio with 30% in particular year. Shifting to remaining data, by 2029 it is perdicated that Finance company will grow which touch the mark approximately 40%. Thr Debentures of production will be lower in 2029. It is estimated that grant of tourism, oil gas and coal will be 22% near about 30% respectively. To cap it all, it is vividly manifested that Finance company experienced an upward trend in past years as well as continue in future, whereas Manufacturing showed downward trend and other factories compelty different from each over throughout the given period of time.
The assigned pillar chart compares the share of five distinct factories
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oil
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gas
which contributed to Brazil economy in
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2009 and 2019 with
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2009 maximum made up of
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Finance
at 30% whereas, fraction of food processing dwindled by 20, %. The proportion of
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Tourism
,
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oil
coal and
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gas
almost equal below 30%. After a decade
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Finance
share over 35% which was peak in time, while Food processing and
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Tourism
participated for economy around 20 % and
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oil
, coal and
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gas
had second highest ratio with 30%
in particular
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. Shifting to remaining data, by 2029 it is
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will grow which touch the mark approximately 40%.
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tourism
,
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oil
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and coal will be 22% near about 30%
respectively
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Finance
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experienced an upward trend in past years
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in future
, whereas Manufacturing
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downward trend and other factories
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrated five different country of Brazil economy on 2009 and 2019 with a forcast for 2021

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