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The line graph shows examination results of England and London for the years 2001to 2006.

The line graph shows examination results of England and London for the years 2001to 2006. Elq3r
The information about exam's results of two nations, England and London, is depicted the rendered line graph over the 6 years. The data has been calibrated in percentage. To begin with, both nations experienced steady but substantial growth between 2001 and 2006. The exam results of London and england witnessed sharper rise first 3 years, whereas, in 2003, the ratio of London overtook the England 's proportion. Moving further, after 2003, the London and England percentage had a more or less parallel hike, in 2006, London got higher results than that of England's results. London scored 58 per cent, England being just 1 per cent behind. To sum up, the respective nations recorded slightly increasing trend thoughtout the period specified, while the results of London cut than that of England.
The information about exam's
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of two nations, England and London,
is depicted
the rendered line graph over the 6 years. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage. To
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begin
with, both nations experienced steady
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substantial growth between 2001 and 2006. The exam
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results
of London and
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england
witnessed sharper rise
first
3 years, whereas, in 2003, the ratio of London overtook the England 's proportion. Moving
further
, after 2003, the London and England percentage had a more or less parallel hike, in 2006, London
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got
higher
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results
than that of England's
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results
. London scored 58 per cent, England being
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just
1 per cent behind. To sum up, the respective nations recorded
slightly
increasing trend
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thoughtout
the period specified, while the
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of London
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than that of England.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows examination results of England and London for the years 2001to 2006.

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