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The given bar graph shows the information of many hospital beds are availble for public citizens in 8 different nations.

The given bar graph shows the information of many hospital beds are availble for public citizens in 8 different nations. D6q66
Overall, it is clear seen that japan is most popular in health protection. On having the cursory glance, as regards first graph, the maximum hospitals beds are noticed in japan, which came out to be 14 thousand. It is followed by Germany with 8 per thousand. The number of hospital beds remain stable in Australia, Notherland, united kingdom and united states, stood at almost 4 per thousand. Canada and Spain has only 3 per thousand hospital beds.
Overall
, it is
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clear
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that japan is most popular in health protection. On having the cursory glance, as regards
first
graph, the maximum hospitals beds
are noticed
in japan, which came out to be 14 thousand. It
is followed
by Germany with 8 per thousand. The number of hospital beds remain stable in Australia,
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Notherland
,
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united kingdom
and
The proper noun "United States" needs to be capitalized.
united states
, stood at almost 4 per thousand. Canada and Spain has
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only
3 per thousand hospital beds.
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IELTS academic The given bar graph shows the information of many hospital beds are availble for public citizens in 8 different nations.

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