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The table shows the data about six cities railway networks underground.

The table shows the data about six cities railway networks underground. AJxVM

The table shows the data about six cities railway networks underground. The table compares data in terms of size, route stretch and people using the transport each year. Three cities network are the oldest in the world sharing maximum number of passengers yearly. The city of London railway network opened in 1863, being the largest network in the globe had a distance stretched at 394 kilometers with 775 people travelling each year. The second city is Paris founded in 1900, had a travelling distance stretched half that of London at 199 kilometers but with people using it more. However, the third largest city Tokyo, less in distance compared to two had maximum number of passengers of the five railway networks that is 1927. Apart from three old railway networks, the newest city Washington DC compared to Kyoto and Los Angles has an extensive railway line length standing at 126 and that too with also more number of passengers adding up each year travelling via railroad system annually.

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