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The bar chart demonstrates three different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

The bar chart demonstrates three different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. LLPgG

The bar chart demonstrates three different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Overall, the amount of waste disposed by landfill and dumping in sea had an downward trend while garbage disposal by the method burning saw a significant fluctuation, especially from 2006 to 2008. Incineration seemed to be the most popular method of disposal thoughout the period except for the year 2007. In 2005, the level of garbage disposed by landfill started at 70 million of tons, which was the largest amount of three methods. But then it was gradually fall 10 million tonnes each year. The same downward trend method – dumping in the sea also had a slight drop between 2005 and 2006, from 55 to 50 million tonnes, then kept unchanged in the next two year and finally dropped to 40 million tonnes in 2008. However, the level of waste disposed by incineration decreased from 65 to 60 million tonnes between2005 and 2006, then collapse to 40 million tonnes in 2007 and dramatically increased back to 65 million tonnes in the end of period.

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 of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

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