Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The given maps illustrate alterations to a Village park dating back to 10 years ago.

The given maps illustrate alterations to a Village park dating back to 10 years ago. 0wYQB

The given maps illustrate alterations to a Village park dating back to 10 years ago. The general overview here is that the park has expanded to include more leisure areas and cafe. According to a decade ago, the entrance was located at the north-west corner. the park was comprised of a large football pitch in the middle of the park with a car park, a tennis courts and the children’s play areas to the north of it. To the south, there were some wood and a pond. In the present, the entrance has remain the same, the car park to accommodate is enlarged from 20 cars to 50 cars, the tennis courts have doubled and the children’s play area has been reduced to a half of its original size to leaves room for the children’s soft play area. The football pitch has been reduced the size, the toilets have been constructed to the east of it. To the south-west of the park the picnic area has been erected, while the pond has been replaced by the lake for boating and the wood are also converted into a cafe on the south-east of the park. Moreover, A circle path has been made all around the periphery of the park.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps illustrate alterations to a Village You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 dating back to 10 years ago. The general overview here is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has expanded to include more leisure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
.

According to a decade ago, the entrance was located
 at the north-west corner.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
Did you mean "comprised" or "consisted of" or "was composed of"?comprisedconsisted ofwas composed of
was comprised of
 a large football pitch in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, a tennis courts and the children’s play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 to the north of it. To the south, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wood and a pond.

In the present, the entrance has Use past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 the same, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 to accommodate is enlarged
 from 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 to 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
, the tennis courts have doubled and the children’s play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to a half of its original size to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 room for the children’s soft play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. The football pitch has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 the size, the toilets have been constructed
 to the east of it. To the south-west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 the picnic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been erected
, while the pond has been replaced
 by the lake for boating and the wood are also
 converted into a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 on the south-east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Moreover
, A circle path has been made
 all around the periphery of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 