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The given tabular chart illustrates the information regarding participates an of females in a senior management in a wages three companies like eldon Limited Prime Focus Limited and finsbury Limited from 1975 to 2015. In 1975 the highest women took part in a senior management in finsbury limited by 16 % where is only 3% age women participated for senior manager in felder Limited in a limited 9% for women register the name as a senior management however it had experienced the rise of 11% in 1980 where is finsbury limited the numbers of women in senior management was declined to voting percentage in 1980 in LDA Limited it was remained unchanged in 1918 however in 1985 it was inclined to 14% in eldon Limited 13 and 15% females per participated in senior management in campus Limited and Fab is very limited in 1985 respectively in 1990 the participation of women in a senior management were increased to all the three companies and unlimited Brampton Limited and wednesbury limited to 28% 50% and 22% respectively in aid unlimited and bra from Limited the more females participated in a senior Management by 33% and 17% in 2019 99 however in Sainsbury Limited it was decreased to 22% in 2000 in 2015 it was twofold increase 264 Basil in 2015 and 2018 other two companies the numbers of women in senior management was also Rose 246 and 26%. Overall it can be concluded that the women for senior management show upward trend in all the three companies in the given time of period.
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Prime Focus
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from 1975 to 2015.

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IELTS academic information regarding participates an of females in a senior management in a wages three companies like eldon Limited Prime Focus Limited and finsbury Limited from 1975 to 2015.

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