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The table shows the average amount of time spent on mobile phones in 3 countries and worldwide from 2010 to 2014.

The table shows the average amount of time spent on mobile phones in 3 countries and worldwide from 2010 to 2014. PrxpX
The given table illustrates information about avarage amount of hours using mobile gadgets in 3 countries and worldwide over a 5 years from 2010 to 2014. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, australian people indicator of spending time on phones increased almost in equal amounts in every year. First of all, that given table indicates all countries and worldwide spending hours rose slightly except Japan, there is small decrease in 2011. Australia started with 1. 2 hours of spending to phones in 2010 and it rose stadily every year with almost 0. 8 hours in 2014, it shows 5. 2 hours per day. Following by India begins 0. 4 hours per day and next 4 years it increased stable width 0. 5 hours, and final year it shows 3 hours per day. Regarding to the Japan, it figures 3. 1 hours per day but it dropped to 3 hours 2011, next 3 years it reached to 5. 1 hours per day. Worldwide numbers remained at 0. 3 hours in previus 2 years, however, it grew 0. 9 hours in 2012 and 2 hours in 2013, final year it indicates 2. 1 hours per day
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using mobile gadgets in 3 countries and worldwide over a 5 years from 2010 to 2014.
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