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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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This table decipts forested areas, in million of hectares, in varital parts of the world in the period from 1990 to 2005. It is clear that Europe and South America have highest numbers, while has lowest one. According to what shown, Europe has risen from 989 million to 1 Billion by the end of 2005, and North America has dropped to 882 million and it was nearly 950 million. Moreover, Africa and North America start with 750 and 700 respectively. And while Africa decreased to less than 700, North America still pretty much the same. Also, Asia increased by 8 from 576 to 584. Add to that Oceania that remained stable around 200. To sum up, we could say that the first place is Europe by 1 Billion, and then Africa and South America that remained around 700. Lastly by Asia that remained steady around 575 and Oceania around 200.
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forested areas, in
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parts of the world in the period from 1990 to 2005. It is
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that Europe and South America have
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numbers, while has
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According to what shown, Europe has risen from 989 million to 1 Billion by the
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end
of 2005, and North America has dropped to 882 million and it was
nearly
950 million.

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, Africa and North America
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with 750 and 700
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. And while Africa decreased to less than 700, North America
still
pretty much the same.
Also
, Asia increased by 8 from 576 to 584.
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to that Oceania that remained stable
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around
200.

To sum up, we could say that the
first
place is Europe by 1 Billion, and then Africa and South America that remained
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around
700.
Lastly
by Asia that remained steady
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around
575 and Oceania
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around
200.
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IELTS academic The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

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