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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. yrOV
These pie charts decipts power using in usual Australian house and green house. It clear that water heating, cooling somehow stable. According to what is shown, in normal house you would use 15% for other appliances, but in green house is nearly doubled, as well as lighting and refrigeration. Moreover, heating decreased from 42%, in usual house, to just 15%. Also, water heating and cooling increased by little amount. To sum up, we could say that green house have decreased heating, doubled other appliances, lighting and cooling, while water heating and cooling still stable some how.
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power using in usual Australian
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and green
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. It
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that water
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heating
,
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cooling
somehow stable.

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, in normal
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you would
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15% for other appliances,
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but
in green
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house
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doubled,
as well
as lighting and refrigeration.
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,
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heating
decreased from 42%, in usual
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house
, to
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just
15%.
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, water
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and
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cooling
increased by
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little
amount.

To sum up, we could say that green
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house
have decreased
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heating
, doubled other appliances, lighting and
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cooling
, while water
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and
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cooling
still
stable
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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