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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. AylX
A glance at the chart given compares the proportion of households who owned and rented in England and Wales over a 93-year period, starting from 1918. As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of families owning their own home experienced an upward trend, whereas there was a downward trend in that of those who rented houses over the given period. Another interesting feature is that the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation was the same in the year 1971. Starting at 23% in 1918, the percentage of households in owned accommodation increased slightly and then reached a peak of approximately 70% in 2001. In the next decade, this figure witnessed a marginal decrease, about 65%. As for renting accommodation, in 1918, the proportion of households in rented accommodation threefold compared to that of those in owned accommodation, roughly 78%. Then, this figure declined dramatically to 50%, which was the same as households owning in 1971. From 1971 to 2001, it plunged to 32%, but in the next 10 years, it climbed slightly by 4%.
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and rented in England and Wales over a 93-year period, starting from 1918.

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seen
from the chart, the percentage of families owning their
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home experienced an upward trend, whereas there was a downward trend in that of those who rented
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houses
over the
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period. Another interesting feature is that the proportion of
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in
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and rented
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accommodation
was the same in the year 1971.

Starting at 23% in 1918, the percentage of
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
increased
slightly
and then reached a peak of approximately 70% in 2001. In the
next
decade, this figure witnessed a marginal decrease, about 65%.

As for renting
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accommodation
, in 1918, the proportion of
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in rented
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accommodation
threefold compared to that of those in
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owned
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accommodation
, roughly 78%. Then, this figure declined
dramatically
to 50%, which was the same as
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households
owning in 1971. From 1971 to 2001, it plunged to 32%,
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10 years, it climbed
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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