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The table show data about underground railway sytems in six major cities.

The table show data about underground railway sytems in six major cities. R0RDY
The provided tabular data regarding underground railway systems in six main cities with the date of opening, number of passengers in years, and total kilometers. Overall, Tokyo was the busiest railways system whereas, the least number of people travels to Kyoto station. London has the largest route of railways. It can be clearly seen that the London station was first introduced in 1863 with a 394 km route and the number of passengers was 775, followed by the Paris build in 1900 with 191 km and the figure for travelers was 1191, While, The Tokyo station was built in1955 with 155 km and 1928 passenger used in one years. Probing further, it is clear that the Washington Dc railway was constructed in 1975 with 126 kilometers and 144 million passengers per year usage. Similarly, Kyoto was introduced in 1981 with the smallest area of 11 km only and the number of travelers was also the least at 36 million. Interestingly, the Los Angeles railway was first opened in 2001 with 50 areas covered and around 50 million people traveled in it.
The provided tabular data regarding underground
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systems in six main cities with the date of opening,
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number
of
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passengers
in years, and total kilometers.

Overall
, Tokyo was the busiest
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railways
system whereas, the least
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number
of
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people
travels to Kyoto station. London has the largest route of railways.

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that the London station was
first
introduced in 1863 with a 394 km route and the
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number
of
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passengers
was 775, followed by the Paris build in 1900 with 191 km and the figure for travelers was 1191, While, The Tokyo station
was built
in1955 with 155 km and 1928
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passenger
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used
in
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one years
.

Probing
further
, it is
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clear
that the Washington Dc
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was constructed
in 1975 with 126 kilometers and 144 million
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passengers
per year usage.
Similarly
, Kyoto
was introduced
in 1981 with the smallest area of 11 km
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and the
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number
of travelers was
also
the least at 36 million.
Interestingly
, the Los Angeles
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railway
was
first
opened in 2001 with 50 areas covered and around 50 million
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people
traveled in it.
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