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integration of problems of people living in abroad

integration of problems of people living in abroad 8GdKk

The bar chart shows the difficulties among various age group of people when they movie to new nation. To begin with, the major problem noticed in you g adults (18–34) was making a new friend which was about 45%. on the contrary, the proportion of this started to decline in the population 35 – 54 and over 55 with the value of 35% and 22% respectively. Initially, the ratio of finding a new place to live was remained constant between 18 -34 and 35–54 time period. Movingfurtheraround 29% populace suffered from to adapt the native language skills and in young group is shifted to 32%. And then, in geriatric generation it reached at peak about 53%. Overall, the majority of older people find it difficult to learn language than others. All age groups experience same problem to a number of extent.

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