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The table provides data about the underground railway facilities in 6 major cities.

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The table provides data about the underground railway facilities in 6 major cities. It is noticeable that all major cities initialized in different years. Overall, the number of passengers in Tokyo is markedly higher than other cities record. Although the length of the London subways system is more extended among them, much fewer travellers consume it on a yearly basis. Focusing on the London subway network, which is extended 394km serves for 775 passengers per year compared to Paris underground opened in 19th century since its opening ceremony it accounts for almost 1200 people used this public transport. However, the figure for Tokyo underground system comprises twice amount of passengers as London which levels at 1927. Considerably, the Washington DC railway system opened no more than after Tokyo began its work, in 1976, and below 145 people use its service per year. Meanwhile, Kyoto and Los Angeles opened to work in 1981 and 2001, and it comprises of mere 45 and 50 passengers per year, respectively. The least length of railway systems is also them by considering 11km and 28km even though becoming newer underground facilities among others.
The table provides data about the
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railway facilities in 6 major cities.

It is noticeable that all major cities initialized in
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different
years.
Overall
, the number of
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passengers
in Tokyo is
markedly
higher than other cities record. Although the length of the London subways
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system
is more extended among them, much fewer
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travellers
consume it on a yearly basis.

Focusing on the London subway network, which
is extended
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394km
serves for 775
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passengers
per year compared to Paris
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underground
opened in 19th century since its opening ceremony it accounts for almost 1200
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people
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used
this public transport.
However
, the figure for Tokyo
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underground
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system
comprises twice amount of
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passengers
as London which levels at 1927.
Considerably
, the Washington DC railway
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system
opened no more than after Tokyo began its work, in 1976, and below 145
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people
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use
its service per year.

Meanwhile, Kyoto and Los Angeles opened to work in 1981 and 2001, and it
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comprises of
mere 45 and 50
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passengers
per year,
respectively
. The least length of railway
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systems
is
also
them by considering
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11km
and
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28km
even though
becoming newer
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underground
facilities among others.
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IELTS academic The table provides data about the underground railway facilities in 6 major cities.

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