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the maps show the outline of the town of felixstone in 1967 and 2001.

the maps show the outline of the town of felixstone in 1967 and 2001. 5A95V
The maps delineate the development of the residential area in Felixstone in 1967 and 2001. Overall, the town of Felixstone had been through several modern modifications with various new leisure amenities, accommodating the indigenous needs. As is illustrated, to the north east of the town sited a farmland in 1967, but it had been converted into a hotel complex with a swimming pool and two tennis courts in 2001. The shops on the east side of High street had been replaced with a block of apartments, while the opposite shops and the golf course in the west have been remained [wrong verb tense and form] unchanged. Regarding the other part of the area, the noticeable changes have been the used-to-be fish market and the marina accompanied with a pier to the south east of the town, which were demolished to make way for a newly erected leisure site with both private and public beach. The hotel to the west of the town has been renovated with an attached car park. On the south west side of the area, there had been facility enhancements with the construction of wind turbines.
The maps delineate the development of the residential area in
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Felixstone
in 1967 and 2001.

Overall
, the
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town
of
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Felixstone
had been through several modern modifications with various new leisure amenities, accommodating the indigenous needs.

As
is illustrated
, to the
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north east
of the
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town
sited a farmland in 1967,
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but
it had
been converted
into a hotel complex with a swimming pool and two tennis courts in 2001. The shops on the east side of High street had
been replaced
with a block of apartments, while the opposite shops and the golf course in the west have
been remained
[
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wrong
verb tense and form] unchanged.

Regarding the other part of the area, the noticeable
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changes
have been the
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used
-to-be fish market and the marina
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accompanied with
a pier to the
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south east
of the
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town
, which
were demolished
to
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make
way for a
newly
erected leisure site with both private and public beach. The hotel to the west of the
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town
has
been renovated
with an attached car park. On the
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south west
side of the area, there had been facility enhancements with the construction of wind turbines.
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IELTS academic the maps show the outline of the town of felixstone in 1967 and 2001.

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