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The table shows the result of a survey in our European country in 2010 in which people of different age groups were asked about their favourite type of TV program.

The table shows the result of a survey in our European country in 2010 in which people of different age groups were asked about their favourite type of TV program. aEO8Y
The table graph represents the result of a nation in 2010 in which percent of individuals in different different age stages about TV viewing preferences. In the age group 11 to 15, 29% of people watched cartoons and 21% was watching features film. The news, spots and TV dramas was the law watched channel which was 6%, 17% and 8% respectively. Further, in the age group 16 to 20, 23% of people watched features films. The percentage of people aged 16 to 20 was 15% who watched cartoons. Total 20% people who watched news and TV dramas in euqually ration. Finally the sports was the average views channel that was only 14%. In conclusion, the highest TV viewing preferences was cartoon for 11 to 15 age group people and the 16 to 20 age group people most like features film.
The table graph represents the result of a nation in 2010 in which percent of individuals in
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11 to 15, 29% of
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cartoons and 21% was watching features film. The news, spots and TV dramas was the law
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channel which was 6%, 17% and 8%
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16 to 20, 23% of
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features films. The percentage of
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aged 16 to 20 was 15% who
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cartoons. Total 20%
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news and TV dramas in
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most like features film.
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IELTS academic The table shows the result of a survey in our European country in 2010 in which people of different age groups were asked about their favourite type of TV program.

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