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The table illustrates the trends in relation to the quantity of five major snacks eaten in Melbourne in 2005, currently and a 2025 prediction.

The table illustrates the trends in relation to the quantity of five major snacks eaten in Melbourne in 2005, currently and a 2025 prediction. gAYL7
The table illustrates the trends in relation to the quantity of five major snacks eaten in Melbourne in 2005, currently and a 2025 prediction. Overall, the amount taken in most if the categories have leaped throughout the years and will continue to rise. However, hamburger and fried chicken were the most preferred take aways throughout the period given. Àccording to the table, in 2005 hamburger and fried chicken accounted for the largest consumption at 40 and 35 repetitively. Presently, hamburgers have seen a modest drop to 38 although it is expected to soar to 51 by 2025. On the other hand, salad consumption started at a mere 5 before leaping to 15 and has been predicted to skyrocket to 41 at the end of the 20 years span. Subsequently, both fried rice and noodles had a substantially low start at 6 before minutely rising to 8 and 8 respectively but are expected to plateau at 9 by 2025.
The table illustrates the trends in relation to the quantity of five major snacks eaten in Melbourne in 2005,
currently
and a 2025 prediction.

Overall
, the amount taken in most if the categories have leaped throughout the years and will continue to rise.
However
, hamburger and fried chicken were the most preferred take
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aways
throughout the period
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given
.

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Àccording
to the table, in 2005 hamburger and fried chicken accounted for the largest consumption at 40 and 35
repetitively
.
Presently
, hamburgers have
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seen
a modest drop to 38 although it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to soar to 51 by 2025.
On the other hand
, salad consumption
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started
at a mere 5
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before
leaping to 15 and has
been predicted
to skyrocket to 41 at the
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end
of the 20 years span.

Subsequently
, both fried rice and noodles had a
substantially
low
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
at 6
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before
minutely
rising to 8 and 8
respectively
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to plateau at 9 by 2025.
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