Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The table illustrates the result

The table illustrates the result Orxg7

The table illustrates the results of research undertaken in Scotland with adults aged from 16-74 to assess their involvement in a variety of cultural activities over a 12-month period. Overall, it is evident that participation in any performance and crafts were the most popular for all age groups. The highest participation in any activities was seen in the 16-24 age group, with 35% and 30% respectively doing performance and visual arts. In contrast, other activities were much lower, particularly those computer-based, at only 10%. Turning to the older age groups, like the under 25s, the highest participation rate seen for 25-44 years olds was in performance, though this was much lower, at only 22%. A similar rate of 22% was evident for the most popular activity for the 45-74 age group, which was crafts. Again, the popularity of computers was very low for all those who were 25 plus, as was interest in writing. Taking all age groups together, it can be seen that performance and crafts were the most popular, at over 19%, whereas cultural purchases and visual arts were slightly less popular at 16% and 15% respectively. Finally, little interest was shown in writing and computing

The table illustrates the results of research undertaken in Scotland with adults aged from 16-74 to assess their involvement in a variety of cultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 over a 12-month period. Overall
, it is evident that participation in any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkactachievementconduct
performance
 and crafts were the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
 for all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 groups.

The highest participation in any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the 16-24 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
, with 35% and 30% respectively
 doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkactachievementconduct
performance
 and visual arts. In contrast
, other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 were much lower, particularly
 those computer-based, at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 10%.

Turning to the older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
, like the under 25s, the highest participation rate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 for 25-44 years olds was in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkactachievementconduct
performance
, though this was much lower, at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 22%. A similar rate of 22% was evident for the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 for the 45-74 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
, which was crafts. Again, the popularity of computers was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 low for all those who were 25 plus, as was Did you mean "interested"?interested
interest
 in writing.

Taking all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 together, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkactachievementconduct
performance
 and crafts were the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
, at over 19%, whereas cultural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
 and visual arts were slightly
 less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
 at 16% and 15% respectively
. Finally
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 interest was shown
 in writing and computing