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The table illustrates the results of research undertaken in Scotland with adults aged from 16-74 to assess their involvement in a variety of cultural activities over a 12-month period. Overall, it is evident that participation in any performance and crafts were the most popular for all age groups. The highest participation in any activities was seen in the 16-24 age group, with 35% and 30% respectively doing performance and visual arts. In contrast, other activities were much lower, particularly those computer-based, at only 10%. Turning to the older age groups, like the under 25s, the highest participation rate seen for 25-44 years olds was in performance, though this was much lower, at only 22%. A similar rate of 22% was evident for the most popular activity for the 45-74 age group, which was crafts. Again, the popularity of computers was very low for all those who were 25 plus, as was interest in writing. Taking all age groups together, it can be seen that performance and crafts were the most popular, at over 19%, whereas cultural purchases and visual arts were slightly less popular at 16% and 15% respectively. Finally, little interest was shown in writing and computing
The table illustrates the results of research undertaken in Scotland with adults aged from 16-74 to assess their involvement in a variety of cultural
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performance
and crafts were the most
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popular
for all
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in the 16-24
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age
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, with 35% and 30%
respectively
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performance
and visual arts.
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, other
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were much lower,
particularly
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only
10%.

Turning to the older
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age
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, like the under 25s, the highest participation rate
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seen
for 25-44 years olds was in
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performance
, though this was much lower, at
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only
22%. A similar rate of 22% was evident for the most
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for the 45-74
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age
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, which was crafts. Again, the popularity of computers was
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low for all those who were 25 plus, as was
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Taking all
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together, it can be
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, at over 19%, whereas cultural
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the result

Academic
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4 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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