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The table illustrates the proportions of students attending in 4 secondary school between 3 years

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The table illustrates the proportions of students attending in 4 secondary school between 3 years which is Specialist Schools, Grammar Schools, Voluntary-controlled Schools, and Community schools. Overall, the totally of 4 secondary schools is 100 percent in 3 years. Moreover, the percentages of Specialist Schools, Grammar Schools, and Voluntary-Controlled Schools in 2000 is more than 2005 and 2009 while the figure of Community Schools in 2000 is less than 2005 and 2009. First, Specialist Schools in 2000 is higher than 2005 and 2009 for 1 and 2 percent. Furthermore, the least percentage of Grammar Schools in 2009 is 12 percent fewer than 2000 and 2005 for 12 and 7 percent. Second, Voluntary-controlled Schools have 52, 38, and 20 percent in 2000, 2005, and 2009. So, in 2000 and 2005 is higher than 2009 for 32 and 18 percent. In addition, in 2009 is the most property of Community Schools for the reason in 2000 and 2005 is lower than 2009 for 46 and 26 percent.
The table illustrates the proportions of students attending in 4 secondary
school
between 3 years which is Specialist
Schools
, Grammar
Schools
, Voluntary-controlled
Schools
, and Community schools.

Overall
, the
totally
of 4 secondary
schools
is 100
percent
in 3 years.
Moreover
, the percentages of Specialist
Schools
, Grammar
Schools
, and Voluntary-Controlled
Schools
in 2000 is more than 2005 and 2009 while the figure of Community
Schools
in 2000 is less than 2005 and 2009.

First
, Specialist
Schools
in 2000 is higher than 2005 and 2009 for 1 and 2
percent
.
Furthermore
, the least percentage of Grammar
Schools
in 2009 is 12
percent
fewer than 2000 and 2005 for 12 and 7 percent.

Second, Voluntary-controlled
Schools
have 52, 38, and 20
percent
in 2000, 2005, and 2009.
So
, in 2000 and 2005 is higher than 2009 for 32 and 18
percent
.
In addition
, in 2009 is the most property of Community
Schools
for the reason in 2000 and 2005 is lower than 2009 for 46 and 26
percent
.
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