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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table shows the rates for various items that five European countries spend on. Overall, when we take a look at the table, we see that the countries have various percentages for the items. France, Germany and UK are the countries which are spending heir money on Housing with the most ratios. (31 %, 33 % and 37 %), whereas Turkey and Spain's most spending item is Food and drink with 36 % and 31 % respectively. On the other hand, Food and drink is the second item that the former countries spending money on. (25 %, 22 %, and 27 %). Clothing almost is thr third thing that the countries spend money on except for Germany and Spain. Because entertainment is ahead of the Clothing for these countries with 19 % and 15 %.
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have various percentages for the items.

France, Germany and UK are the
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which are spending heir money on Housing with the most ratios. (31 %, 33 % and 37 %), whereas Turkey and Spain's most spending item is Food and drink with 36 % and 31 %
respectively
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spending money on. (25 %, 22 %, and 27 %). Clothing almost is
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

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