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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. kYgEO
The graph illustrates the average number of people in UK who are travelling everyday by car, bus or train from the year 1970 to 2030. Overall, the number of people who travelled by car increased rapidly between 1970 to 2020 and also most of the public will choose to travel by car in the year 2030. Additionally, it is also observed that a least number of people preferred to travel by bus from the year 1970 to 2020 and the same trend will continue in 2030. On th other hand an upward trend is observerd for the number of people who travelled by bus from the year 1970 to 2020 and this trend will continue upto 2030. To begin with, the number of people which are below 6 millions travelled by car in the year 1970 and that trend was approximately constant till 1980 and later on, in the year 2000 the number increased significantly above 6 million and after that it slightly decrease in 2010 and then it showed and upwar trend in the year 2020 and that trend continued upto 2030. In contrast, the number of people who were travelling by bus decreased rapidly and it invloved some fluctuation till 2020 and that will continue till 2030. Meanwhile, the population slightly below 3 million opted for train in the 1970 and that increased to 3 million in 2000 and that number was constant till the year 2010 and subsequently, there was a drastic increase in the number in 2020 and that trend will continue in 2030.
The graph illustrates the average
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in UK
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who
are travelling everyday by
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car
, bus or train from the
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year
1970 to 2030.

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number
of
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people
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who
travelled by
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car
increased
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and
also
most of the public will choose to travel by
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car
in the
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2030.
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, it is
also
observed that
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a
least
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number
of
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people
preferred to travel by bus from the
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year
1970 to 2020 and the same
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trend
will
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in 2030. On
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other hand an upward
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travelled by bus from the
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1970 to 2020 and this
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2030.

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people
which are below 6
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millions
travelled by
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year
1970 and that
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was approximately constant till 1980 and later on, in the
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2000 the
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increased
significantly
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and after that it
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decrease in 2010 and then it
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upwar
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2020 and that
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continued
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upto
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were travelling by bus decreased
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till 2020 and that will
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till 2030.

Meanwhile, the population
slightly
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opted for train in the 1970 and that increased to 3
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million
in 2000 and that
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was constant till the
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2010 and
subsequently
, there was a drastic increase in the
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in 2020 and that
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trend
will
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continue
in 2030.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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