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The table illustrates the proportion of mobile phone owners that used different features on their phone in 2006, 2008 and 2010.

The table illustrates the proportion of mobile phone owners that used different features on their phone in 2006, 2008 and 2010. BwMBw

The table illustrates the proportion of mobile phone owners that used different features on their phone in 2006, 2008 and 2010. Overall, the percentage of mobile phone user making calls took the lead over the period given. Moreover, the average mobile phone owner searching the Internet and recording video increased significantly in the later stage. In 2006, all mobile phone user using their phone for making calls, whereas the figure for searching the Internet and recording video was not avaiable at that time and no data reseached. Subsequently, in 2008, there was a considerable rise of the promotion of phone user searching the Internet and recording video to 41% and 9%, similar to playing games with 42%. Besides, the percentage of people who sending & receiving text messenger and taking photos increased slightly to 75% and 71%, and the figure for making calls stayed unchange with 100%. In 2010, there was a sharp increase of total phone user using their phone to searching the Internet and recording video to 26% and 35% and became more popular. In contrast, the percentage of phone owner using all other features were not change too much and roughly to their percentage in 2008, and absolutely making calls took the lead as the most popular features on their phone.

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phone
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user
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searching
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video
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In 2010, there was a sharp increase of total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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user
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phone
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, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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. 