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THE CHART SHOWS A RESULT OF A SUVEY CONDUCTED BY A PERSONEL DEPARTMENT AT A MAJOR COMPANY.

THE CHART SHOWS A RESULT OF A SUVEY CONDUCTED BY A PERSONEL DEPARTMENT AT A MAJOR COMPANY. Yw2Gn
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES COMPARES THE DIFFERENT FACTOR AFFECTING WORKING PERFORMANCE IN TWO AGE GROUP (18-30 AND 45-60). OVERALL, THE MOST IMPACTING FACTOR FOR EMPLOYING PEROFRMANCES IS CHANCE FOR PERSONAL DEVELOPMENT BY THE EMPLOYES AGED FROM 18 TO 30 YEARS WHEREAS, THE LEAST IMPACTING FACTOR IS JOB SECUIRITY FOR PEOPLE BETWEEN 45 AND 60. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, TEAM SPIRIT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 60% FOR BOTH AGE GROUPS. IN CONTRAST, PERSONEL DEVELOPMENT IS MORE THAN 90% AND 45% RESPECTVELY. MEANWHILE, WORKING ENVIRONMENT AND PROMOTION PROSPECT SHOWS A SIMILAR INFLUENCE REAGRDLESS OF VARIOUS AGES. AS FAR AS COMPETENT BOSS IS CONCERNED, IT SHOW VERY NEGLIGIBLE DIFFERENCE IN BOTH GROUPS WITH AROUND 60%. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, JOB SECUIRITY AFFCT EMPLOYES ABOUT 50% FOR YOUNGER WORKERS AND NEAR 26% FOR OLDER WORKERS. JOB SATISFACTION AND MONEY SHOW SIMILAR DIFFERENCE OF APPROXIMATELY 5%. FINALLY, WORK ENVIRONMENT IS SIMILAR FOR ALL WORKING PEOPLES.
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES COMPARES THE
DIFFERENT
FACTOR AFFECTING WORKING PERFORMANCE IN TWO AGE GROUP (18-30 AND 45-60).

OVERALL
, THE MOST IMPACTING FACTOR FOR EMPLOYING
PEROFRMANCES
IS CHANCE FOR PERSONAL DEVELOPMENT BY THE
EMPLOYES
AGED FROM 18 TO 30 YEARS WHEREAS, THE LEAST IMPACTING FACTOR IS JOB
SECUIRITY
FOR
PEOPLE
BETWEEN 45 AND 60.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, TEAM SPIRIT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 60% FOR BOTH AGE GROUPS.
IN CONTRAST
,
PERSONEL
DEVELOPMENT IS MORE THAN 90% AND 45%
RESPECTVELY
. MEANWHILE, WORKING ENVIRONMENT AND PROMOTION PROSPECT
SHOWS
A SIMILAR INFLUENCE
REAGRDLESS
OF VARIOUS AGES. AS FAR AS COMPETENT BOSS
IS CONCERNED
, IT
SHOW
VERY
NEGLIGIBLE DIFFERENCE IN BOTH GROUPS WITH AROUND 60%.

THE BAR CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, JOB
SECUIRITY
AFFCT
EMPLOYES
ABOUT 50% FOR YOUNGER WORKERS AND NEAR 26% FOR OLDER WORKERS. JOB SATISFACTION AND MONEY
SHOW
SIMILAR DIFFERENCE OF APPROXIMATELY 5%.
FINALLY
, WORK ENVIRONMENT IS SIMILAR FOR ALL WORKING PEOPLES.
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