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THE FIGURE SHOW A RESULT OF A SURVEY OF 1000 CHILDREN IN FIVE NATIONS ABOUT THE SOCILA RESPONSIBLITIES.

THE FIGURE SHOW A RESULT OF A SURVEY OF 1000 CHILDREN IN FIVE NATIONS ABOUT THE SOCILA RESPONSIBLITIES. RRyAV

THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE CONSEQUENCE OF A SURVEY IN FIVE NATIONS (USA, UK, MEXICO, EGYPT AND JAPAN) ABOUT THREE RESPONSIBILITIES FOR SOCIETY. OVERALL, THE MARRIAGE IS THE HIGHEST GRANTED RESPONSIBILITY FOR PEOPLE MORE THAN 15 YEARS WHEREAS, THE CRIMINAL RESPONSIBILITY IS THE MOST TAKEN FOR GRANTED FOR INDIVIDUALS LESS THAN 15 YEARS. IT CAN BEE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE PEOPLE OF UK AND JAPAN SHOWS SHOW A SIMILAR AGE TO TAKE RESPONSIBILTY OF MERELY ABOVE 20 WHEREAS, THE INDIVIDUALS FROM MEXICO AND EGYPT MARRIED AT THE AGE OF NEAR 17. HOWEVER, IN USA THE CITIZENS CHOOSE THE AGE POF EXACT 18 TO MARRY. IN CONTRAST, THE VOTING AGE FOR USA AND EGYPT IS ALMOST SIMILAR WHILE, IN UK AND MEXICO THE VOTING AGE IS MORE THAN 15 YEARS. VOTING AGE IN JAPAN IS HIGHER THAN OTHER WITH MERELY BELOW 20. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE AGE FOR CRIMINAL RESPONSIBILITY FOR THE CIVILIAN OF UK, MEXICO AND EGYPT HAS NEGLIGIBLE DIFFERNCE WHICH IS STATED AS NEAR 15. FINALLY, IN USA THE CRIME RESPOSIBILITIES THE PEOPLE AGED BELOW LESS THAN WHEREAS, THE JAPANESE TOOK CRIME SCENE AT AGE ABOVE 15.

THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE CONSEQUENCE OF A SURVEY IN FIVE NATIONS (USA, UK, MEXICO, EGYPT AND JAPAN) ABOUT THREE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutypowerimportancerestraintauthorityliability
RESPONSIBILITIES
 FOR SOCIETY.

OVERALL
, THE MARRIAGE IS THE HIGHEST GRANTED You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutypowerimportancerestraintauthorityliability
RESPONSIBILITY
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PEOPLE
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RESPONSIBILITY
 IS THE MOST TAKEN FOR GRANTED FOR INDIVIDUALS LESS THAN 15 YEARS.

IT CAN BEE CLEARLY
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SEEN
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PEOPLE
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SHOWS
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SHOW
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AGE
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RESPONSIBILTY
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AGE
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IN USA
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AGE
 POF EXACT 18 TO MARRY. IN CONTRAST
, THE VOTING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
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AGE
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AGE
 IN JAPAN IS HIGHER THAN OTHER WITH MERELY
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THE BAR CHART FURTHER
 COLLATE THAT, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
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RESPONSIBILITY
 FOR THE CIVILIAN OF UK, MEXICO AND EGYPT HAS NEGLIGIBLE Possible spelling mistake found.DifferenceDIFFER NCEDifférance
DIFFERNCE
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RESPOSIBILITIES
 THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
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AGE
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