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The table illustrates the population of people over 65 and above in 3 countries

The table illustrates the population of people over 65 and above in 3 countries 1o5BA

The table illustrates the population of people over 65 and above in 3 countries(Canada, Germany and UK) in 3 different years(1988, 2000, 2030). Overall, it can be seen that the populations sees an increase over the period of proposed 42 years from the initial year 1988. Germany has the highest population contributing to ages 65 and above over the three years, followed by Canada and lastly by UK. Canada and Germany both saw a sharp rise in numbers from 1998 to 2000, jumping from 16. 32% to 20. 67% for Canada and 20. 45% to 25. 32% for Germany. On the other hand, UK witnessed only a small rise in the number going from 14. 23% to 14. 89%. The same trend is predicted to be there for Germany and Canada in 2030 again, they are going to see a uprise in the numbers to 30. 42% and 26. 35% respectively. Accompanying them in this rise in percentage is also going to be UK, which will notice a boost in their percentages in 2030 going to 20. 35%.

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 1988. Germany has the highest population contributing to ages 65 and above over the three years, followed by Canada and lastly
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 uprise in the numbers to 30. 42% and 26. 35% respectively
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