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The supplied pie charts illustrate the data about what percentage of water is utilized in six areas given by question for various purposes, namely, industrial, agricultural and domestic use.

The supplied pie charts illustrate the data about what percentage of water is utilized in six areas given by question for various purposes, namely, industrial, agricultural and domestic use. lRjyD
The supplied pie charts illustrate the data about what percentage of water is utilized in six areas given by question for various purposes, namely, industrial, agricultural and domestic use. Overall, what stands out from the charts is that the water usage in the industry has far more proportion rather than others in two areas, whereas agricultural use of water has much more ratio in four areas. Looking at the details, as regards Industrial use, much as this is the least rate in Africa and Central Asia, 7% for the former and 5% for the latter, respectively, there is the greatest water use in industrial areas in North America ( 48%) and Europe (53%). With respect to Domestic use, for this option, the highest portion is in South America with 19%, while Central Asia shares the lowest rates (7%) with South East Asia. As for Agricultural use, 88% of water usage in Central Asia is represented. Additionally, we can witness just over a half of water usage in Europe, which means that this is the dip point compared to other regions. With a conclusive phrase, it is noticeable that developed zones may have required less water than unimproved areas.
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, for this option, the highest portion is in South America with 19%, while Central Asia shares the lowest rates (7%) with South East Asia. As for Agricultural
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usage in Europe, which means that this is the dip point compared to other regions.

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IELTS academic The supplied pie charts illustrate the data about what percentage of water is utilized in six areas given by question for various purposes, namely, industrial, agricultural and domestic use.

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