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The diagram shows the process of producing honey.

The diagram shows the process of producing honey. NyreN
The diagram illustrates information regarding how honey is produced by bees. At first glance, it is evident that in the first step bees are searching near flowers and nect to flower for making numerous small cells. After that, in the five step bees are spreading air on their various cells. Furthermore, after air spread by bees, then beam is spread into water from water evaporation. In the last stage, bees are produced honey in own hive. Overall, there are seven steps of produce honey by many bees. The process start from making hive on plants and in the end of the whole process bees are spread water evaportion and produced honey.
The diagram illustrates information regarding how honey
is produced
by bees.

At
first
glance, it is evident that in the
first
step bees are searching near flowers and
nect
to flower for making numerous
small
cells. After that, in the
five step
bees are spreading air on their various cells.

Furthermore
, after air spread by bees, then beam
is spread
into water from water evaporation. In the last stage, bees
are produced
honey in
own
hive.

Overall
, there are seven steps of produce honey by
many
bees. The process
start
from making hive on plants and in the
end
of the whole process bees
are spread
water
evaportion
and produced honey.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the process of producing honey.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
111 words
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