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the graph below shows the result of a survey of young people in four European countries on the most effective solution of global warming. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the result of a survey of young people in four European countries on the most effective solution of global warming. kgYlN
This bar chart shows how many hot drinks, which are tea and coffee, imported in Canada, US, UK and Germany. In y-axis, measured in tonnes. It is clear from the graph that the most significant hot drinks is tea in UK, while the coffee is most popular in other countries. According to what is shown, tea is most prefer in the united kingdom, with makes up 80000 tonnes. on the other hand, Germany’s people are like coffee much more than the tea ( 5000 T to 4100 T respectively). While, Canada and the United State have important almost equal amount of tea and coffee, which is around 40000 tonnes and 20000 tonnes respectively. To sum up, we could say that the tea is the most popular drinks among British’s people, whereas Germans people are prefer coffee more than tea.
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hot drinks, which are
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tea
and
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coffee
, imported in Canada, US, UK and Germany. In y-axis, measured in tonnes. It is
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clear
from the graph that the most significant hot drinks is
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tea
in UK, while the
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coffee
is most popular in other countries.

According to what
is shown
,
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tea
is most prefer in the
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united kingdom
, with
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makes
up 80000 tonnes.
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on
the other hand, Germany’s
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people
are like
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coffee
much more than the
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tea
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(
5000 T to 4100 T
respectively
).

While, Canada and the United State have
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important
almost equal amount of
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tea
and
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coffee
, which is around 40000 tonnes and 20000 tonnes
respectively
.

To sum up, we could say that the
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tea
is the most popular drinks among British’s
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people
, whereas Germans
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people
are prefer
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coffee
more than
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tea
.
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the result of a survey of young people in four European countries on the most effective solution of global warming.

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